Take
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Last weekend, I stayed at home with my wife and daughter.
My wife wanted me to take care of daughter but I did not.
So she disappointed my attention. In my case, I would like to take a rest for a weekend. That is problem with my wife.
How can I do for our peace?
I know that It would be done I follow the attention of my wife.
But it is not easy for me to keep the hope of wife.
Anyway, I will do my best for the peace of my family.
It was same as the other weeked so I have no special things to memorize for diary.
I studied "Take" verb. Take verb has lots of meanings.
After studying it, it can't help surprising.
Take verb in this sentensce he takes complaints with smile, which means that it is not "he complain to other people" but it is "other people complain to him"
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]^^
I think it's just normal for married couples to fight a lot especially if there is baby or young child involved. Most couples are stressed during that stage in their marriage. It's really difficult to raise babies and young children and also making a schedule or taking turns on who will take care of your child. I know so because that's what I've observed with my parents.hehehe. But you know, Mr. [이름], you should make the most of the time when your child is still small and you are the only ones she is depending on. Because time is so fast and the next thing you know, she is all grown up and doesn't need you or rather spend time with her friends or boyfriend. Cherish every moment!
xoxo,
~Ella^^
MY CORRECTIONS^^:
Last weekend, I stayed at home with my wife and daughter.>>CORRECT J
My wife wanted me to take care of daughter but I did not.
>>My wife wanted me to take care of our daughter but I didn't.So she disappointed my attention.
>>So she was disappointed with my lack of attention.
In my case, I would like to take a rest for a weekend.
>>In may case, I'd like to take a rest for the weekend.
That is problem with my wife.
>>But that is a problem with my wife.How can I do for our peace?
>>What can I do so we will not fight?I know that It would be done I follow the attention of my wife.
>>I know that it would be over if I follow or do what my wife wants.But it is not easy for me to keep the hope of wife.>>But it is not easy for me to keep her hopes up.Anyway, I will do my best for the peace of my family.
>>Anyway, I'll do my best to have peace in the family.It was same as the other weeked so I have no special things to memorize for diary.>>It was the same as the other weekend so I have nothing special to write in my diary.I studied "Take" verb.
>>I studied the verb Take.
Take verb has lots of meanings.
>>The verb Take has lots of meanings.After studying it, it can't help surprising.>>After studying it, I can't help but be surprised.Take verb in this sentensce he takes complaints with smile, which means that it is not "he complain to other people" but it is "other people complain to him"
>>The verb Take in the sentence, he takes complaints with a smile doesn't mean that the person complains to others but other people are the ones who complain to him.
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