take a rest.

2010-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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good afternoon. jennifer~ I was happy to hear your cheerful voice. It said to me that your trip was very good. sometimes we need to take some rest. rest means just take a relax time and do nothing. I think rest has another meanings. it means meet someone who can give us encuraging and experience something familiar. I hope that also your trip was a good rest~

강사 첨삭

[이름], Thank you very much for this. I really had a great trip and vacation.  I was able to take a rest and spent time with people that I care for. Vacation is not common for me. I only get a very few vacations. Anyway, thank you for understanding. ;) Have a great day! XOXO, Jenny Here are the corrections: good afternoon. jennifer~ >>Good afternoon Jenifer!  I was happy to hear your cheerful voice. >>Correct.  It said to me that your trip was very good. >>You told me that your trip was very good. sometimes we need to take some rest. >> We sometimes need to take some rest. rest means just take a relax time and do nothing. >>Rest means just having a relaxed time and doing nothing.  I think rest has another meanings. >> I think rest has another meaning. it means meet someone who can give us encuraging and experience something familiar. >> It also means meeting someone who gives us an encouraging and unforgettable experience.  I hope that also your trip was a good rest~ >> I hope that you had a good rest on your vacation.    

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