take a rest.
학생이 쓴 원문
good afternoon. jennifer~ I was happy to hear your cheerful voice. It said to me that your trip was very good. sometimes we need to take some rest. rest means just take a relax time and do nothing. I think rest has another meanings. it means meet someone who can give us encuraging and experience something familiar. I hope that also your trip was a good rest~
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you very much for this. I really had a great trip and vacation. I was able to take a rest and spent time with people that I care for. Vacation is not common for me. I only get a very few vacations. Anyway, thank you for understanding. ;)
Have a great day!
XOXO,
Jenny
Here are the corrections:
good afternoon. jennifer~
>>Good afternoon Jenifer!
I was happy to hear your cheerful voice.
>>Correct.
It said to me that your trip was very good.
>>You told me that your trip was very good.
sometimes we need to take some rest.
>> We sometimes need to take some rest.
rest means just take a relax time and do nothing.
>>Rest means just having a relaxed time and doing nothing.
I think rest has another meanings.
>> I think rest has another meaning.
it means meet someone who can give us encuraging and experience something familiar.
>> It also means meeting someone who gives us an encouraging and unforgettable experience.
I hope that also your trip was a good rest~
>> I hope that you had a good rest on your vacation.
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