Take a rest

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! ^.^

Happy Tuesday! ^^

A wonderful Thursday to you! ^^,

Thank you for making your composition today! ^^.

It was a realization.

Frankly speaking, nowadays, I just think about working hard to earn a lot of money for the future.

Sad to say, I don\'t give time to myself to have some rest.

Because of your writing, it made me realize that myself is the most important thing for me.

Therefore, before, I finished checking your composition, I had some nap. Hahaha! ^^

Thank you very much! ^^.

Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you later! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Two woodman friends went up to the mountain to split firewoods.

>> Two woodman friends went up to the mountain to split firewood.

They began to make firewoods competitively by chopping with an axe.

>> They began to make firewood competitively by chopping them with their axes.

One friend has a burning desire for victory and work hard without taking a rest from the early morning to late night.

>> CORRECT!

But, another friend do not so.

>> But, another friend didn\'t do the same thing.

He worked for 50 minutes and take a rest for 10 minutes regularly.

>> CORRECT!

So soon, It was time to went down the maountain and they compared the outcome of the work.

>> So soon, it was time to go down the mountain and they compared the outcome of their work.

Unexpectedly, a friend who had a rest while working got a more firewood than a man who worked without rest.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Unexpectedly, the friend who had some rest while working produced more firewood than the man who worked without any rest.

A friend who has a big desire to win grumbled with shaking his head.

>> The friend who has a big desire to win grumbled with shaking his head.

\" Why do you have much more than I even though I worked harder?\"

>> \"Why do you have much more than I even thought? I worked harder.\"

Another friend said gently, \"You can not succeed by only working hard without knowing your axe are blunting.\"

>> Another friend said gently, \"You can not succeed by only working hard without knowing your axe is blunting.\"

We sometimes need to stop and rest for getting more fruits.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: We sometimes need to stop working and have some rest to harvest more fruits.

>> OR: We sometimes need to step back and relax in order to get more fruits.

It is true that people living in modern society have a busy life, but I recommend you to take a rest for the future not tomorrow.

>> It is true that people living in a modern society have busy lives, but I recommend you to take a rest now for the future not tomorrow.