take a walk

2012-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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My university is around mountains. So there are many paths that people can easily take a walk. After lunch, I took a walk with my lab's members in the forest. The reason why we took a walk was due to consideration of fat and health in our bodies. Anyway I walked the path talking to each member happily. I took some pictures and picked up a bur. It had been a long time to see the bur. The bur was so cute but stung because of their prkcles. After walking, I was totally wet by my sweat but felt good. And I took a nap involuntarily only for a short time. And I think I'm going back for English skils. So I endeavor studying English more and more, especially speaking. After spliting times, I should preview what I will talk to and review what I talked to. While speaking early in the morning, I wrongly heard inspiration as installation. So I didn't tell anything more. 1. a 2. b 3. d 4. a 5. a

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Hi there! Walking is indeed a great exercise to reduce fats in our bodies. I wish I could go walking too if the weather gets good this week. Anyway, preparing for our class and reviewing our class after can greatly help you improve better. Just keep it up! Kindly check the corrections I made for your work today. Have a great Monday evening! ~Teacher Nica My university is around mountains. >> Our university is located around the mountains. So there are many paths that people can easily take a walk. >> So there are many paths where people can take a walk. After lunch, I took a walk with my lab\'s members in the forest. >> Correct! >> OR After lunch, I took a walk in the forest with my laboratory class members. The reason why we took a walk was due to consideration of fat and health in our bodies. >> The reason why we took a walk was to consider having a healthy body. >> OR We took a walk because it is a good exercise for having a healthier body. Anyway I walked the path talking to each member happily. >> Anyway, I have walked while talking with each member happily. I took some pictures and picked up a bur. >> Correct! >> OR I took some pictures and picked up some burs. It had been a long time to see the bur. >> It has been a long time that I have not seen bur. The bur was so cute but stung because of their prkcles. >> The bur was so cute but I had been stung by its prikcles.After walking, I was totally wet by my sweat but felt good. >> After walking, I got totally wet by my sweat but I felt good. >> OR After walking, I perspirated totally but I felt good. And I took a nap involuntarily only for a short time. >> Then I took an effortless nap for a short time.And I think I\'m going back for English skils. >> And I thought of going back to my English skills. So I endeavor studying English more and more, especially speaking. >> So I endeavor to study English futher, especially my speaking skills. >> OR So I will strive to study English further, especially with speaking. After spliting times, I should preview what I will talk to and review what I talked to.>> After spliting times, I should preview what I will talk about in class and review what I have said in class.While speaking early in the morning, I wrongly heard inspiration as installation. >> While speaking early this morning, I mistakenly heard the word \'inspiration\' as \'installation\'. So I didn\'t tell anything more. >> Correct! >> OR SO I wasn\'t able to say more about it.1. a >> Correct!2. b >> Correct!3. d >> b. a --- the4. a >> Correct!5. a >> b. the --- the

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