take a walk
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Hi [이름]! Exercise is indeed great for everybody. It helps us all to be physically fit and healthy. :) Always take care. See you.
Lei J
Famous people who related health say, exercise is really important to us. And try to do exercise
>> Famous people who knows something about health says that exercise is really important to us and that we should try to exercise.
The importance of exercise already kenw.
>> I already know the importance of it.
but most tried and failed. even if they already knew the importance. It's not good.
>> However, for most people that have tried to exercise, they fail; which makes it not good even if they know how important it is for them.
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