take care my health.
학생이 쓴 원문
the older and older, I feel my body power couldn't get hard work. I am easy to get tired and I am easy to get a cold. I need to exercise. but I spend my most of day at work.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I feel you. I thought of the same thing lately. I’ve been living a very sedentary lifestyle and it makes me a little bit worried. I know that I should exercise and be healthy all the time also but I’m so lazy. Well, yeah I’ll just try my best to motivate myself. Talk with you in class tomorrow!
XOXO,Jenny
the older and older, I feel my body power couldn't get hard work.
>>The older I get, the more difficult it is for me to do hard work.
I am easy to get tired and I am easy to get a cold.
>> I easily get tired and catch cold.
I need to exercise. but I spend my most of day at work.
>> I need to exercise but I spend most of my days at work.
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