Take pictures and run away
학생이 쓴 원문
If I saw dinosaurs really, I\'ll take pictures them to sell these pictures. I can get money when I prove that pictures are not CG. However, I have to run away because dinosaurs are dangerous. Well, since some dinosaurs are very fast, even go to dinosaurs\' world is also dangerous.In conclusion, I just want to get money from dinosaurs!
강사 첨삭
If I saw dinosaurs really, I\'ll take pictures them to sell these pictures.
>> If I saw real dinosaurs, I would take pictures of them and sell them.
I can get money when I prove that pictures are not CG.
>> If I proved that the pictures were not computer graphics, I could get money.
However, I have to run away because dinosaurs are dangerous.
>> However, I would have to run away because dinosaurs are dangerous.
Well, since some dinosaurs are very fast, even go to dinosaurs\' world is also dangerous.
>> Well, since some dinosaurs were very fast, going to the dinosaurs\' world would also be dangerous.
In conclusion, I just want to get money from dinosaurs!
>> In conclusion, I would just want to profit from the dinosaurs.
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