Take Three Things To Desert Island
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I would take a boat, many books and many food to a desert island.
Because there are no Wifi, so I couldn\'t use smartphone or laptop there.
If I want to go home, I can go by boat.
And I don\'t have something to do in a desert island, then I will be very bored.
So I will take books and read it.
Finally, there are less food so I will always hungry, so I will take many food.
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Hi, [이름]. Well done on accomplishing your homework. Here are some corrections for clarification of the thoughts and grammar.
^^T. Ara
I would take a boat, many books and many food to a desert island.
>>> I would take a boat, many books, and plenty of food to a desert island
Because there are no Wifi, so I couldn\'t use smartphone or laptop there.
Because there are no Wifi, so I couldn\'t use smartphone or laptop there.
>>> because there is no Wi-Fi, so I couldn\'t use a smartphone or laptop there.
If I want to go home, I can go by boat.
>>> If I want to go home, I can go by boat.
And I don\'t have something to do in a desert island, then I will be very bored.
And I don\'t have something to do in a desert island, then I will be very bored.
>>> Since there\'s not much to do on a desert island, I would be very bored,
So I will take books and read it.
So I will take books and read it.
>>> so I will take books to read.
Finally, there are less food so I will always hungry, so I will take many food.
Finally, there are less food so I will always hungry, so I will take many food.
>>> Lastly, since there\'s less food, I will always be hungry, so I will take plenty of food with me.
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