taking a movie
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Hi, [이름]!
Wow! Fantastic baby! (hahaha)
I\'m so proud of you! ^^
This is something unusual and I\'m happy to know that you had fun.
See you next week!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Today I was a camera director and actor and costume director.But I didn\'t got a money.It was a first day I have a chance to take a movie.It was really fun.And I had a hard carry in the movie.It was very short movie,but it was horror movie so it was fun.
>> Today I was a camera director, an actor, and a costume director, but I didn\'t got any money. It was the first day and I had a chance to shoot a movie. It was really fun. I also had a hard time doing the movie. It was a very short horror movie, but it was fun.
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