Taking a rest

2014-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi Debby :) In Wednesday, I think "is it Wednesday yet?!". hahaha But I feel comfortable when it's Thursday or expecially Friday. Then how about you? Do you also think like that? kkk I will not take a class untill 1th July. So we can talk to each other soon again. It is the vacation, so I think I need to take a break for a while to recover my energy. Don't worry. My enthusiasm for learning English isn't dead. Take care well even without me. kkk XD <Essay> I want to stay in a waterpark for the heat. Of course I have a plan to go waterpark with my friends. It is really exciting. I hope the D-day come fast to me!

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Hi there [이름]^^ It had been a pleasure having you in my class but like any other hard working man you deserve to have a vacation!^^ A vacation means having fun and not sleeping all day!^^ kkkkkkk Please do not kill your enthusiasm for English! haha. I will wait for you to come back and this is your official last homework for now. Homeworks for you will also be on vacation.kkkk. Take care!^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hi Debby^^ >> CORRECT OR> Hey Debby^^In Wednesday, I think \"is it Wednesday yet?!\". hahaha >> CORRECT Or> I just feel that \"Is it just Wednesday?\"But I feel comfortable when it\'s Thursday or expecially Friday. >> But I feel comfortable when it\'s Thursday or especially Friday.  Then how about you? Do you also think like that? kkk >> CORRECT OR> Do you feel the same?I will not take a class untill 1th July. >> I will not take a class until the first of July. So we can talk to each other soon again. >> CORRECT OR> We can communicate with each other soon. It is the vacation, so I think I need to take a break for a while to recover my energy. >> CORRECT OR> I will have a rest and take advantage of my vacation. Don\'t worry. My enthusiasm for learning English isn\'t dead.>> CORRECT Or> I will never give up on English.Take care well even without me. kkk XD>> CORRECT OR> Take lots of care even with my absence.<Essay>I want to stay in a waterpark for the heat. >> CORRECT OR> I want to be in a water park to fight the warm weather. Of course I have a plan to go waterpark with my friends. >> Of course I have a plan to go to a waterpark with my friends.  It is really exciting. I hope the D-day come fast to me! >> It is really exciting. I hope the D-day comes fast for me!

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