Taking a rest
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Debby :)
In Wednesday, I think "is it Wednesday yet?!". hahaha
But I feel comfortable when it's Thursday or expecially Friday. Then how about you? Do you also think like that? kkk
I will not take a class untill 1th July. So we can talk to each other soon again. It is the vacation, so I think I need to take a break for a while to recover my energy. Don't worry. My enthusiasm for learning English isn't dead.
Take care well even without me. kkk XD
<Essay>
I want to stay in a waterpark for the heat. Of course I have a plan to go waterpark with my friends. It is really exciting. I hope the D-day come fast to me!
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
It had been a pleasure having you in my class but like any other hard working man
you deserve to have a vacation!^^
A vacation means having fun and not sleeping all day!^^ kkkkkkk
Please do not kill your enthusiasm for English! haha.
I will wait for you to come back and this is your official last homework for now.
Homeworks for you will also be on vacation.kkkk.
Take care!^^
^^T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hi Debby^^
>> CORRECT
OR> Hey Debby^^In Wednesday, I think \"is it Wednesday yet?!\". hahaha
>> CORRECT
Or> I just feel that \"Is it just Wednesday?\"But I feel comfortable when it\'s Thursday or expecially Friday.
>> But I feel comfortable when it\'s Thursday or especially Friday.
Then how about you? Do you also think like that? kkk
>> CORRECT
OR> Do you feel the same?I will not take a class untill 1th July.
>> I will not take a class until the first of July.
So we can talk to each other soon again.
>> CORRECT
OR> We can communicate with each other soon.
It is the vacation, so I think I need to take a break for a while to recover my energy.
>> CORRECT
OR> I will have a rest and take advantage of my vacation.
Don\'t worry. My enthusiasm for learning English isn\'t dead.>> CORRECT
Or> I will never give up on English.Take care well even without me. kkk XD>> CORRECT
OR> Take lots of care even with my absence.<Essay>I want to stay in a waterpark for the heat.
>> CORRECT
OR> I want to be in a water park to fight the warm weather.
Of course I have a plan to go waterpark with my friends.
>> Of course I have a plan to go to a waterpark with my friends.
It is really exciting. I hope the D-day come fast to me!
>> It is really exciting. I hope the D-day comes fast for me!
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