Taking a walk
학생이 쓴 원문
My best part of the day is taking a walk along English Bay. There are beautiful sunsets and a lot of people who exercise. I feel good ever time I go there.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Racheal! I can imagine how refreshing it must be to walk along a scenic bay. It invigorates both the body and mind. Please enjoy the experience. See you again!
--Teacher Anji
My best part of the day is taking a walk along English Bay.
>> The best part of my day is taking a walk along English Bay.
There are beautiful sunsets and a lot of people who exercise.
>> The sunset is beautiful and there are a lot of people exercising.
I feel good ever time I go there.
>> I feel good every time I go there.
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