taking care of your child -- 2

Secondly, spending time with their children gives parents the opportunity to form a good relationship with them. Families will be able to bond together. In this way, their children not only feel that they are important but also that they are part of their family. Thus this will make their children feel secure and loved. Lastly, chhildren having sufficient time with their parents is confident and social. For instance, parents can give praise and encouragement to their children and it affects their character positively.

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