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Dear [Name].Camille Hello~~!! it's a nice Sunday. How was your weekend? I hope that you had a good weekend!! I had late dinner time with my friend at the day before yesterday. We went to pasta restaurant in [이름]-Dae University (The place of [이름]-Dae University is favorite most young peoples and near my home.) We met 9:10 PM It was too late to have dinner But we was so hungry and we ordered the Carbonara. The Carbinara was too awfully small to satisfy ourselve but we had a good time After dinner , We came back home at 11:30 PM Anyway My dear Camille~ Let's move next page (or next composition)

Hello my dear Bella! Happy Monday. Im glad to hear that you had a nice weekend with your friends..;) Thank you for sending your composition. Well, In this composition you have to be careful with your punctuation marks and prepositions. Good job though. Have a great day! Talk >> correct Dear [Name].Camille>>Dear [Name]. [Name], >>Hi Ms. [Name]!Hello~~!! it's a nice Sunday.>>Hello! It's a nice Sunday.How was your weekend?>>correctI hope that you had a good weekend!!>>I hope that you had a good weekend.I had late dinner time with my friend at the day before yesterday.>>I had a late dinner with my friend the day before yersterday.We went to pasta restaurant in [이름]-Dae University>>We went to a pasta restaurant in [이름]-Dae University.(The place of [이름]-Dae University is favorite most young peoples and near my home.)>>(The location of kyun-Dae university is the favorite of  mostly young people and people near my home.)We met 9:10 PM >>We met at 9:10 PM.It was too late to have dinner>>CorrectBut we was so hungry and we ordered the Carbonara.>>But we were so hungry and we ordered Carbonara.The Carbinara was too awfully small to satisfy ourselve but we had a good time >>The Carbonara was awfullt too small to satisfy ourselves but we had a good time.After dinner , We came back home at 11:30 PM >>After dinner, we went back home at 11:30 PM.Anyway My dear Camille~>>correctLet's move next page (or next composition) >>Let's move to the next page (to the composition part)