Talk about a memorable meal you have had.

2024-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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Few years ago, I went to Bali, Indonesia for my honeymoon. I ate special dishes in resorts. It was made shrimps with special sauces. I\'ve never experiences this style shrimp foods. I still memory this food.

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]! Thank you for sharing this memorable meal you had in Indonesia. It does sound amazing.
~Teacher Ryka^^

Few years ago, I went to Bali, Indonesia for my honeymoon.
>> A few years ago, I went to Bali, Indonesia, for my honeymoon.

I ate special dishes in resorts.
>> I ate special dishes at resorts.


It was made shrimps with special sauces.
>> One of them was made with shrimp and special sauces.


I\'ve never experiences this style shrimp foods.
>> I had never experienced this style of shrimp dish before. 


I still memory this food.
>> I still remember this food fondly.

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