Talk about a mentor or role model who has had a significant impact on your life.
학생이 쓴 원문
My grandfather was very diligent and he had a thrift and saving mind.
He always moved his body and made a housework.
And he was a rich little bit in his town, however he didn\'t buy a piece of bread easily. because he had an poor experiences when he was young.
I was learned many life attitude from him naturally.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! Thank your for sharing your experience about this topic. It\'s really good to hear about your grandfather.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
My grandfather was very diligent and he had a thrift and saving mind.
>>> My grandfather was incredibly diligent and had a thrifty mindset.
He always moved his body and made a housework.
>>> He always remained active, engaging in household chores regularly.
And he was a rich little bit in his town, however he didn\'t buy a piece of bread easily. because he had an poor experiences when he was young.
>>> Despite being relatively wealthy in his town, he was hesitant to spend money freely due to his past experiences with poverty during his youth.
I was learned many life attitude from him naturally.
>>> I naturally learned many valuable life lessons from him.
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