Talk about a teacher who had a positive influence on you. Describe this person and explain why he or
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Kerrie who I met in Canada has a positive influence on me.
>> Correct.
>> Kerrie, who I met in Canada has a positive influence on me.
she has a lot of passion and makes me study harder.
>> She has a lot of passion and makes me study harder.
>> She is a very passionate person and she influenced me to study harder.
She taught me how to speak and write English.
>> She taught me how to speak and write in English.
So, I can\'t forget her forever, and I hope to meet her again one day.
>> Correct.
>> So, I can\'t forget her, and I hope to meet her again one day.
>> So, I will remember her forever, and I hope to meet her again someday.
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