Talk about a time when you found a task harder to accomplish than you expected. What were you trying
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Very good! Despite failing the test, you realized that there were life-lessons to learn. Stay positive like this and you\'ll go places! Have a great weekend! See you in class!
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I will talk about a time when I applied to be an army officer.
>> Correct!
One of reason why I choose the university where I am studying now is that I wanted to apply an army eaxm because my university is qualified for taking the exam.
>> One reason why I chose the university where I am studying now is that I wanted to take the army exam and my university is qualified for taking the exam.
The reason why it is difficult for me is that I should prepare physical test, witting test, and interview.
>> The reason why it is difficult for me is that I should prepare for the physical test, written test, and interview.
In addition, I competed a lot of people, so I should study and work out harder.
>> In addition, I competed with a lot of people, so I should have studied and work out harder.
Although I failed to be an army officer, I learn many things such as how to prepare interview and run a long distance race.
>> Although I failed to be an army officer, I learn many things such as how to prepare for an interview and run a long distance race.
As a result, that time is difficult for me for these reaosns.
>>These are the reasons why that was a difficult time for me.
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