Talk about an experience in your life that made you feel embarrassed. Describe it and say why it was
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After several days when a scholastic aptitude test was finished, my best friend and I planned to go out to play at Yeouido Park. We packed delicious lunch such as sandwich, fruit and Fried Rofu Rice Balls. And we was walking a way for a bus. To take a bus, we had to cross the street at a crosswalk. At that time, bus that we find was coming and we were impatient ,so we decided to run a crosswalk. At that time, unfortunately, I tripped over a banner string there was between trees ,which is right on the pedestrian. When I fell forward, I was really embarrassed and surprised ,so I had no time to use my hand. Eventually, my two front teeth were chipped. And my friend was also surprised. She called 119 survive. I took an ambulance firstly with the friend and finally, I had to do implant. This is the most embarrassed experience in my life and my most horrible affair to this day. Unluckily, I don't want to remember that day.
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Everyone has an embarrassing moment to remember^^
It is very humiliating; however, it makes us laugh if we reminisce that moment someday~
May you have a Friday filled with happiness!
After several days when a scholastic aptitude test was finished, my best friend and I planned to go out to play at Yeouido Park.
>>After several days when the scholastic aptitude test was finished, my best friend and I planned to go out to play at Yeouido Park. We packed delicious lunch such as sandwich, fruit and Fried Rofu Rice Balls.
>>We packed delicious lunch such as sandwich, fruit and fried tofu rice balls. And we was walking a way for a bus.
>>Then, we waited for a bus.
To take a bus, we had to cross the street at a crosswalk.
>>To take a bus, we had to cross the street through the crosswalk. At that time, bus that we find was coming and we were impatient ,so we decided to run a crosswalk.
>>At that time, the bus was coming and we were impatient, so we decided to run across the crosswalk.
At that time, unfortunately, I tripped over a banner string there was between trees ,which is right on the pedestrian.
>>At that time, unfortunately, I tripped over a banner string which was between trees, right on the pedestrian.
When I fell forward, I was really embarrassed and surprised ,so I had no time to use my hand.
>>When I fell forward, I was really embarrassed and surprised, so I had no time to use my hand.
Eventually, my two front teeth were chipped.
>>CORRECT!And my friend was also surprised.
>>CORRECT!
She called 119 survive.
>>She called 119.
I took an ambulance firstly with the friend and finally, I had to do implant.
>>I took the ambulance first with my friend and finally, I had to have implants.
This is the most embarrassed experience in my life and my most horrible affair to this day.
>>This is the most embarrassing experience in my life and my most horrible affair to this day. Unluckily, I don\'t want to remember that day.
>>CORRECT!
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