Talk about an experience in your life that made you feel embarrassed. Describe it and say why it was

2014-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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After several days when a scholastic aptitude test was finished, my best friend and I planned to go out to play at Yeouido Park. We packed delicious lunch such as sandwich, fruit and Fried Rofu Rice Balls. And we was walking a way for a bus. To take a bus, we had to cross the street at a crosswalk. At that time, bus that we find was coming and we were impatient ,so we decided to run a crosswalk. At that time, unfortunately, I tripped over a banner string there was between trees ,which is right on the pedestrian. When I fell forward, I was really embarrassed and surprised ,so I had no time to use my hand. Eventually, my two front teeth were chipped. And my friend was also surprised. She called 119 survive. I took an ambulance firstly with the friend and finally, I had to do implant. This is the most embarrassed experience in my life and my most horrible affair to this day. Unluckily, I don't want to remember that day.

강사 첨삭

Everyone has an embarrassing moment to remember^^ It is very humiliating; however, it makes us laugh if we reminisce that moment someday~ May you have a Friday filled with happiness! After several days when a scholastic aptitude test was finished, my best friend and I planned to go out to play at Yeouido Park. >>After several days when the scholastic aptitude test was finished, my best friend and I planned to go out to play at Yeouido Park. We packed delicious lunch such as sandwich, fruit and Fried Rofu Rice Balls. >>We packed delicious lunch such as sandwich, fruit and fried tofu rice balls. And we was walking a way for a bus. >>Then, we waited for a bus.  To take a bus, we had to cross the street at a crosswalk. >>To take a bus, we had to cross the street through the crosswalk. At that time, bus that we find was coming and we were impatient ,so we decided to run a crosswalk. >>At that time, the bus was coming and we were impatient, so we decided to run across the crosswalk. At that time, unfortunately, I tripped over a banner string there was between trees ,which is right on the pedestrian. >>At that time, unfortunately, I tripped over a banner string which was between trees, right on the pedestrian. When I fell forward, I was really embarrassed and surprised ,so I had no time to use my hand. >>When I fell forward, I was really embarrassed and surprised, so I had no time to use my hand. Eventually, my two front teeth were chipped. >>CORRECT!And my friend was also surprised. >>CORRECT! She called 119 survive. >>She called 119. I took an ambulance firstly with the friend and finally, I had to do implant. >>I took the ambulance first with my friend and finally, I had to have implants.  This is the most embarrassed experience in my life and my most horrible affair to this day. >>This is the most embarrassing experience in my life and my most horrible affair to this day. Unluckily, I don\'t want to remember that day. >>CORRECT!

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