Talk about five specific goals you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to ac
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The specific goals I want to achieve this year are first losing weight, secondly going to Lotte World with my friend, thirdly having a pajama party at my friend\'s house, and fourthly having My tablet with a pen.
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Woah! Your goals for this year sound exciting~ But I hope you have shared with me something about how you can achieve them. ^_^
-Chammy.
The specific goals I want to achieve this year are first losing weight, secondly going to Lotte World with my friend, thirdly having a pajama party at my friend\'s house, and fourthly having My tablet with a pen.
>>The specific goals I want to achieve this year are first losing weight. Second, going to Lotte World with my friend. Third, going to a pajama party at my friend\'s house. And lastly, have my tablet with a pen.
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