Talk about five specific goals you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to ac
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First, I want to get a certification to be a librarian.
To get that certification, I had to take a required class at schoo.
So, two month ago, I graduated that school
Second, I want to learn English nore at the academy or other institution.
So, I have attened that academy until last month.
Third, I want to get driver license.
But, I failed to get that licenst. That exceed my ability.
And then, I want to learn another language.
So, I started learning chaniese from last month.
Last, I want to get my properr job.
But I didn't look for my proper job yet.
To look for my job, I'm searching for information and send a resume.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Friday**,
Thanks for sharing the five goals that you want to accomplish this year.
I hope that you\'ll accomplish these goals.
Anyway, what proper job are you talking about?
Is this being a librarian?
I\'ll call you later.
T. Barbara**,
First, I want to get a certification to be a librarian.
>> Correct!
OR:>> First, I want to be a librarian.To get that certification, I had to take a required class at schoo.
>> To get that certification, I had to take a required class at school.So, two month ago, I graduated that school
>> Two months ago, I graduated at school.Second, I want to learn English nore at the academy or other institution.
>> Second, I want to learn more English at the academy or other institution.So, I have attened that academy until last month.
>> So, I have attended that academy last month.Third, I want to get driver license.
>> Third, I want to get a drivers license.But, I failed to get that licenst.
>> But I failed to get that license.
That exceed my ability.
>> That exceeds my ability.And then, I want to learn another language.
>> Correct!
OR:>> Another, I want to study another language.
So, I started learning chaniese from last month.
>> So, I started learning Chinese last month.Last, I want to get my properr job.
>> lastly, I want to get a proper job.
But I didn\'t look for my proper job yet.>> But I can\'t search for a proper job yet.
To look for my job, I\'m searching for information and send a resume.
>> To look for a job, I search for information and I send my resume.
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