Talk about five specific goals you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to ac

2014-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Barbara

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First, I want to get a certification to be a librarian. To get that certification, I had to take a required class at schoo. So, two month ago, I graduated that school Second, I want to learn English nore at the academy or other institution. So, I have attened that academy until last month. Third, I want to get driver license. But, I failed to get that licenst. That exceed my ability. And then, I want to learn another language. So, I started learning chaniese from last month. Last, I want to get my properr job. But I didn't look for my proper job yet. To look for my job, I'm searching for information and send a resume.

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Hi [이름]!   Happy Friday**, Thanks for sharing the five goals that you want to accomplish this year. I hope that you\'ll accomplish these goals. Anyway, what proper job are you talking about? Is this being a librarian?   I\'ll call you later.   T. Barbara**,   First, I want to get a certification to be a librarian. >> Correct! OR:>> First, I want to be a librarian.To get that certification, I had to take a required class at schoo. >> To get that certification, I had to take a required class at school.So, two month ago, I graduated that school >> Two months ago, I graduated at school.Second, I want to learn English nore at the academy or other institution. >> Second, I want to learn more English at the academy or other institution.So, I have attened that academy until last month. >> So, I have attended that academy last month.Third, I want to get driver license. >> Third, I want to get a drivers license.But, I failed to get that licenst. >> But I failed to get that license. That exceed my ability. >> That exceeds my ability.And then, I want to learn another language. >> Correct! OR:>> Another, I want to study another language. So, I started learning chaniese from last month. >> So, I started learning Chinese last month.Last, I want to get my properr job. >> lastly, I want to get a proper job. But I didn\'t look for my proper job yet.>> But I can\'t search for a proper job yet.  To look for my job, I\'m searching for information and send a resume. >> To look for a job, I search for information and I send my resume.    

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