Talk about KESI
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Hello Kathrine.
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It is very hot Korea now.
>> It is very hot in Korea now.
The temperature degree is almost 34.
>> The temperature is almost 34 degrees.
Actually I am a little nervous these days.
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I am trying not to be nervous but...
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You knows, I can not control my mind myself.
>> You know, I could not control myself/ my mind.
I prepared for my interview during the weekend.
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So, Today I would like to talk about KESI which is my office and where I am working for.
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First of all KESI is the acromym for an elevator association in Korea.
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KESI stands for Korea elevator safety institute.
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KESI was founded in 1992 as a foundation and The statue of KESI has been changed to a special corporation since 1994.
>> KESI was founded in 1992 only as a foundation and the statute of KESI had changed it into a special corporation since 1994.
KESI’s main responsibility is to secure the Safety of the elevator in Korea
>> KESI’s main responsibility is to secure the Safety of elevators in Korea
And My company’s moto is that Safety of lifts, national welfare.
>> And my company’s motto is that Safety of lifts, national welfare.
The safety is our top goal.
>> Safety is our top goal/priority.
There are two Elevator inspection institute in Korea.
>> There are two elevator inspection institute sin Korea.
The first inspection institute is KESI.
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I believe that I explain it enough.
>> I believe that I explained it enough.
It is founded under the special law.
>> It was founded under a special law.
And the other institute is KEST.
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