Talk about KESI

2015-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Hello Kathrine. It is very hot Korea now. The temperature degree is almost 34. Actually I am a little nervous these days. I am trying not to be nervous but... You knows, I can not control my mind myself. I prepared for my interview during the weekend So, Today I would like to talk about KESI which is my office and where I am working for. First of all KESI is the acromym for an elevator association in Korea. KESI stands for Korea elevator safety institute. KESI was founded in 1992 as a foundation and The statue of KESI has been changed to a special corporation since 1994. KESI’s main responsibility is to secure the Safety of the elevator in Korea And My company’s moto is that Safety of lifts, national welfare. The safety is our top goal. There are two Elevator inspection institute in Korea. The first inspection institute is KESI. I believe that I explain it enough. It is founded under the special law. And the other institute is KEST.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kathrine. 

>> correct!
 It is very hot Korea now.

>> It is very hot in Korea now.

The temperature degree is almost 34. 

>> The temperature is almost 34 degrees.
 Actually I am a little nervous these days.

>>  correct!

I am trying not to be nervous but...

>>  correct! 
 You knows, I can not control my mind myself.

>> You know, I could not control myself/ my mind.
 I prepared for my interview during the weekend.

>>  correct!

So, Today I would like to talk about KESI which is my office and where I am working for.
>> correct! 
First of all KESI is the acromym for an elevator association in Korea.

>> correct! 

KESI stands for Korea elevator safety institute. 

>> correct! (Korea Elevator Safety Institute)
 KESI was founded in 1992 as a foundation and The statue of KESI has been changed to a special corporation since 1994.
>> KESI was founded in 1992 only as a foundation and the statute of KESI had changed it into a special corporation since 1994.
KESI’s main responsibility is to secure the Safety of the elevator in Korea

>> KESI’s main responsibility is to secure the Safety of elevators in Korea
 And My company’s moto is that Safety of lifts, national welfare.

>>  And my company’s motto is that Safety of lifts, national welfare. 

The safety is our top goal.
>> S
afety is our top goal/priority.
There are two Elevator inspection institute in Korea.

>> There are two elevator inspection institute sin Korea.
 The first inspection institute is KESI.

>> correct! 

 I believe that I explain it enough.

>>  I believe that I explained it enough.
 It is founded under the special law.

>>  It was founded under a special law.
 And the other institute is KEST.

>> correct!  

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