Talk about KESI

2015-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

It stands for Korea Elevator safety technology institute. It is founded under the civil law. The later institute was founded to deter KESI’s tyranny. But because of a lot of side effects, Korea government made a decision that is the consolidation of the two company. And this process is on going now and the consolidation of the two company will be finished by next year. The ration between two company is 7 and 3.

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [Name]!

Well, it is just but normal that you are nervous because your interview is coming.
But anyway, you can do it! I know it. ^^

Anyway we\'ll talk about more your composition later.

Have a great day ahead!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


It stands for Korea Elevator safety technology institute.

>> correct! (Korea Elevator Safety technology Institute)
 It is founded under the civil law. 

>> It was founded under the civil law.
 The later institute was founded to deter KESI’s tyranny.

>> correct! 
 But because of a lot of side effects, Korea government made a decision that is the consolidation of the two company.
>> But because of a lot of side effects, the Korean government made a decision that is the consolidation of the two companies.

>> or: But because of a lot of side effects, the Korean government made a decision to consolidate the two companies.
 And this process is on going now and the consolidation of the two company will be finished by next year.

>> And this process is still on going and the consolidation of the 2 companies will be finished next year.
 The ration between two company is 7 and 3.

>> The ratio between the 2 companies is 7 is to 3.

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