Talk about Kim
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Good morning once again Mr. [Name]!
Well, I guess you are really staring your year right.
You are now sending your compositions. Wow. That\'s good! kkkk
And I appreciate it of course.
It ahs been a long time that you are not writing so writing your compositions is a good practice too.
Thanks for your time today and see you tomorrow!
You take care and have a great day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
She retired after winning silver medal in So-chi winter Olympic in Russia.
>> She retired after winning silver medal in the Sochi winter Olympic in Russia.
As a skating athlete, She has been considered as the model of challenge.
>> correct!
Because figure skating is an unpopular sports in Korea.
>> correct!
When she started figure skating, there was no support form the skating institute.
>> correct! (from)
So, her mother had to decide to invest her family\'s all properties for her future.
>> So her mother decide to invest all their properties for their future.
To make her daughter good athlete, Good cough was needed and It costed a lot of money.
>> To make her daughter a good athlete, a good coach was needed but it costs a lot of money.
After becoming an famous athlete, Her family is compensated through a lot of CF and famous.
>> After becoming a famous athlete, her family was compensated through a lot of CF and they became famous.
I heard that her next vision after famous figure skating athlete is becoming IOC member.
>> I heard that her next vision after becoming a famous figure skating athlete is to become an IOC member.
Her career as an honorary ambassador for PyongChang Games would be beneficial for her next vision.
>> correct!
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