Talk about MERS

2015-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Today, I like to talk about MERS that outbreaked in Korea and impacted every aspect in Korea. One of my coworker did not show up 2 weeks ago. I was curious about him so I texted him and asked what’s up He answered that I am isolated by local health center for 1 week because of MECRS. I was slightly surprised and ask again. How did it happen? You didn’t show any symptom of MERS. You did not cough hard and You did not have fever didn’t you. My colleague said yes you are right. The reason why I am quarantined is not the infection of MERS. I never touched MERS patient directly. The only reason that I am quarantined is that I visited the hospital where MERS patient visited. He visited there when MERS patient visited after 1 hour. He couldn’t go anywhere in his house and the local health center workers called him every 1hours to check wether he goes to other site.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Mr. [Name]!

Well, it is good to know that your co-worker was not affected.
MERS outbreak in your country was really scary for the last 2 months.
But it is good that it was already contained and there is no more outbreak and tha
t you  and your family are all okay.

Enjoy this weekend then and have some time to rest.
See you again next week.!

Always,
Kathrine ^^


Today, I like to talk about MERS that outbreaked in Korea and impacted every aspect in Korea.

>> Today, I like to talk about MERS which had an outbreak  in Korea and made an impact in every aspect in Korea.
 One of my coworker did not show up 2 weeks ago. 

>> One of my coworkers did not show up 2 weeks ago. 
 I was curious about him so I texted him and asked what’s up

>> correct! 

>> or: I was curious about him so I texted him to asked how he was.
 He answered that I am isolated by local health center for 1 week because of MECRS.

>> He said that he was isolated by the local health center for 1 week because of MERS.
 I was slightly surprised and ask again. How did it happen?

>> correct! 
 You didn’t show any symptom of MERS.

>>   You didn’t show any symptoms of MERS. 

You did not cough hard and You did not have fever didn’t you.

>> You did not cough hard and You did not have fever didn’t you?
 My colleague said yes you are right.

>> correct!

The reason why I am quarantined is not the infection of MERS.

>> The reason why I am quarantined is not because of infection of MERS.

I never touched MERS patient directly.

>> I never contacted with a MERS patient directly.
 The only reason that I am quarantined is that I visited the hospital where MERS patient visited.

>>  The only reason that I am quarantined is that I visited the hospital where the MERS patient visited.
 He visited there when MERS patient visited after 1 hour.

>> He visited there when the MERS patient visited after 1 hour.
 He couldn’t go anywhere in his house and the local health center workers called him every 1hours to check wether he goes to other site.

>>  He couldn’t go anywhere outside his house and the local health center workers called him every after 1hour to check whether he goes to another site/place.  

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