Talk about recycling
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that is wonderful.
Because the recycling gives help for many people.
The poor people are using clothes recycle.
Also, many peoples are using the recycling product. That a trend for today.
Because recycling is economic and saving the world.
Thank you teacher, Becca !
강사 첨삭
Hey Ashley!
TGIF ^^
Thanks for sending in this one :)
I also think that we should promote recycling.
It can help us save money and save our planet ;)
See you in class!
~Teacher Becca
Here are some corrections:
I think that is wonderful.
>> correct!
>> OR: I think this is wonderful.
>> OR: I think recycling is wonderful.Because the recycling gives help for many people.
>> Because recycyling helps many people.The poor people are using clothes recycle.
>> The poor people are using recycled clothes.Also, many peoples are using the recycling product.
>> Many people are using recycled products, too.
That a trend for today.
>> That is a trend nowadays.
>> That is a trend these days.Because recycling is economic and saving the world.>> Because recycling has economic advantages and it saves the world.Thank you teacher, Becca !
>> Thank you, teacher Becca!
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