Talk about recycling

2014-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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I think that is wonderful. Because the recycling gives help for many people. The poor people are using clothes recycle. Also, many peoples are using the recycling product. That a trend for today. Because recycling is economic and saving the world. Thank you teacher, Becca !

강사 첨삭

Hey Ashley! TGIF ^^ Thanks for sending in this one :) I also think that we should promote recycling. It can help us save money and save our planet ;)   See you in class!   ~Teacher Becca   Here are some corrections:   I think that is wonderful. >> correct! >> OR: I think this is wonderful. >> OR: I think recycling is wonderful.Because the recycling gives help for many people. >> Because recycyling helps many people.The poor people are using clothes recycle. >> The poor people are using recycled clothes.Also, many peoples are using the recycling product. >> Many people are using recycled products, too. That a trend for today. >> That is a trend nowadays. >> That is a trend these days.Because recycling is economic and saving the world.>> Because recycling has economic advantages and it saves the world.Thank you teacher, Becca ! >> Thank you, teacher Becca!

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