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2015-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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There must be something reasons that are causing the infidelity. If I can speak English more than now, I can totally contradict their opinion. They were beside off the point I think. The question is that Is the sexual fidelity a make or break factor in marriage. The main point is that if partner cheat their wife or husband, Will it become the factor for the divorce? And will it be able to be the main reason for the divorce. Yes, Every episode can has the exception. Couple have to consider their children and economic situation. But I think that it is another matter. So, My opinion is clear. Sexual fidelity is the biggest matter for marriage and Just only one Infidelity can brake the trust in marriage life and it can cause the divorce easily. My conclusion is that sexual fidelity is a main make or break factor in marriage.

강사 첨삭

Great afternoon Mr. [Name].
Well, that must have been a very interesting debate. And each of us has different views about it.
Though I am not married, but since I was born as a Catholic and living in a Catholic country, we were taught that marriage is sacred and that couples should give due respect to each other and love one another. And I agree that sexual infidelity can make or break the relationship of the couple.
Anyway, this is quite a huge issue so let\'s discuss more about it next time.

Thanks a lot and take care!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

There must be something reasons that are causing the infidelity.

>> There must be some reasons which causes infidelity.
If I can speak English more than now, I can totally contradict their opinion.
>> If I can express my opinion in English better than now, I want to contradict their opinion.
They were beside off the point I think.

>> They were off the point I think.
The question is that Is the sexual fidelity a make or break factor in marriage.

>>  The question is that, \"Is sexual fidelity a make or break factor in marriage?\"
The main point is that if partner cheat their wife or husband, Will it become the factor for the divorce?
>>   The main point is that if a partner cheat their wife or husband, will it become the factor for the divorce?
And will it be able to be the main reason for the divorce.
>>  correct!
Yes, Every episode can has the exception.

>> Yes, every episode has the exception.

Couple have to consider their children and economic situation.
>> correct!
But I think that it is another matter.

>> correct!

So, My opinion is clear.

>> correct!

Sexual fidelity is the biggest matter for marriage and Just only one Infidelity can brake the trust in marriage life and it can cause the divorce easily.
>> Sexual fidelity is the biggest matter for marriage and only a single act of infidelity can brake the trust in marriage life and it can cause divorce easily.
My conclusion is that sexual fidelity is a main make or break factor in marriage.

>> correct!

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