Talk about something a friend, a family member of yours did that you were proud of. Describe what th

2017-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I am so proud of my father. There are two reasons to support my opinion. The first reason is that I learn a lot of things from him, such as how to do scuba diving and how to care myself. The second reason is that he always lives and works enthusiastically. Whenever I am lazy, he stimulates me and cheer me up. As a result, I am proud of him for these reasons.

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Good morning [이름]!
Thank you for sharing wonderful things about your father. I could really feel how proud you are of him. It\'s great that you have a loving relationship with you father.^^
~Kelly^^
I am so proud of my father.
>> Correct.
There are two reasons to support my opinion.
>> Correct.
The first reason is that I learn a lot of things from him, such as how to do scuba diving and how to care myself.
>> The first reason is that I learn a lot of things from him, such as scuba diving and taking care of myself.
The second reason is that he always lives and works enthusiastically.
>> Correct.
Whenever I am lazy, he stimulates me and cheer me up.
>> Correct.
As a result, I am proud of him for these reasons.
>> Correct.

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