Talk about the best gift that you received.

2025-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

학생이 쓴 원문

I usually give gifts to someone to express my gratitude. And I often give gifts on someone\'s birthday, especially my daughters\' birthdays, when they start or graduate from school, and join or leave a company. After my daughters got jobs, I actually have received gifts from them more often. I received several clothes including a winter coat and a golf bag as gifts from my elder daughter. And I also received vitamins, perfume, and a winter scarf from my younger daughter. I was happy every time I received gifts, but I told my daughters that I didn\'t want any more gifts because they had to save money for the future. But they still give me various gifts. But the best gift I have received was my mother\'s side dishes. I really like my mother\'s side dishes. My mother is already 82 years old, but she still makes side dishes for me. I am always grateful to my mother. I will miss her side dish for a long time after she goes to heaven some day.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
In my case, I do love both my parents\' cooking.
_T. SHAY^^
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I usually give gifts to someone to express my gratitude.
>>Correct
OR: I usually give gifts to someone as an expression of gratitude.
And I often give gifts on someone\'s birthday, especially my daughters\' birthdays, when they start or graduate from school, and join or leave a company.
>>And I often give gifts to someone on their birthday, especially my daughters\' birthdays, when they start or graduate from school, and when they join or leave a company.
After my daughters got jobs, I actually have received gifts from them more often.
>>Correct
OR: When my daughters got their jobs, they frequently gave me gifts.
I received several clothes including a winter coat and a golf bag as gifts from my elder daughter.
>>Correct
OR: My elder daughter gave me clothes and a golf bag.
And I also received vitamins, perfume, and a winter scarf from my younger daughter.
>>Correct
OR: I got vitamins, perfume, and a winter scarf from my younger daughter.
I was happy every time I received gifts, but I told my daughters that I didn\'t want any more gifts because they had to save money for the future. But they still give me various gifts.
>>Correct
OR: I was happy every time they gave me gifts, but I told them to save their money and not buy any more gifts for me.
But the best gift I have received was my mother\'s side dishes.
>>Correct
OR: All those gifts are good; however, the best gift for me is my mother\'s side dishes.
I really like my mother\'s side dishes.
>>Correct
OR: I really enjoy my mother\'s side dishes.
My mother is already 82 years old, but she still makes side dishes for me.
>>Correct
OR: My mother is quite old, but she still makes side dishes for me.
I am always grateful to my mother.
>>I am always grateful for my mother.
I will miss her side dish for a long time after she goes to heaven some day.
>>I will miss her side dishes for a long time after she goes to heaven someday. 

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