talk about the meal you last ate or had. Use as many adjectives as you can.

2023-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I ate wonderful Lotteria tornado. It was added sweet Nutella and it never fails. When I just put one spoon of it in my mouth, it was so soft that I can\'t feel it. What I literally just felt is sweetness and coldness it left.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ye [이름]! ^-^

Ice cream not only contains vitamins, but it also gives you a lot of energy. We need proteins, lipids, and carbohydrates for our bodies to manufacture energy, and ice cream is a great source of all three. However, keep in mind that eating too much of a good thing might have undesirable consequences.

Thank you for answering your homework.
I will see you again on Friday.^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I ate wonderful Lotteria tornado.
>>> I ate the wonderful Tornado ice cream at Lotteria.
It was added sweet Nutella and it never fails.
>>> Nutella was added and it never fails.
When I just put one spoon of it in my mouth, it was so soft that I can\'t feel it.
>>> When I just put one spoonful of it in my mouth, it was so soft that I couldn\'t feel it.
What I literally just felt is sweetness and coldness it left.
>>> What I literally just felt was the sweetness and coldness it left.

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