Talk about the things you like about the city you live in. It could be the environment, the people o
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First, I love my place that it\'s near Han river so that I can walk around there. Also, when it\'s a sunny, I can have a chicken with beer. Second, there are a lot of fun and entertainment. And last one, wherever you visit and there are no dangerous places in South Korea. If you lose something in Korea, you can find it quickly.
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I am very impressed with your improvements, Elic. Your sentence construction is getting better and better, day by day. Please continue to read our book in advance, also review the lessons we have finished so that you\'ll have a refresher and you\'ll easily remember the things you need to know. :)
>> First, I love my place, it\'s near the Han river and I can walk around there.
Also, when it\'s a sunny, I can have a chicken with beer.
>> Also, when it\'s sunny, I can have chicken and beer.
Second, there are a lot of fun and entertainment.
>> Secondly, there are a lot of fun activities for entertainment.
And last one, wherever you visit and there are no dangerous places in South Korea.
>> Lastly, there are no dangerous places in South Korea.
If you lose something in Korea, you can find it quickly.
>> Correct. OR If you lose something in Korea, you can easily find it.
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