Talk about why the free school lunch program in South Korea is important and how it helps students d
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Hi [이름] [이름],
Your explanation of the importance of the free school lunch program in South Korea is insightful. It does help create a sense of equity among students, ensuring that everyone has access to nutritious foods regardless of their income. Also, by providing a balanced diet, the program promotes positive health outcomes among students, moving them away from unhealthy food choices. Continue the thoughtful research!
~Teacher Cathy
Free school lunch program helps students feel equal.
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OR>>Free school lunch program will help the students feel equal.
Some students can\'t afford good lunch whereas some can, which arrouse feeling of unfair to them.
>>Some students can\'t afford a good lunch whereas some can, which may make them feel that things are unfair.
And it\'s definitely not a good experience, which can affect whole life.
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OR>>And it\'s definitely not a good experience, which can affect their whole life.
They may end up pursuing money too much or feeling frustrated for not enough money.
>>They may end up pursuing money too much or feeling frustrated for not having enough money.
Students feel more fair in their childhood thanks to free school lunch program.
>>Students feel more fair in their childhood thanks to the free school lunch program.
Also it provides balanced diet so it\'s good for their health.
>>Also it provides a balanced diet so it\'s good for their health.
If we let students eat what they want, they will look for sweet, fatty, salty and spicy food(unhealthy food).
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