Talk about your best memory from a holiday.
학생이 쓴 원문
When it was my birthday, I got Nintendo! So I was too excited to do games. And I said to my mom and dad to buy game packs.🤣🤣🤣
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
When it was my birthday, I got Nintendo!
>>> On my last birthday, I got a Nintendo!
So I was too excited to do games.
>>> So, I was too excited to play games.
And I said to my mom and dad to buy game packs
>>> And I asked my mom and dad to buy me some game packs.
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