Talk about your best memory from a holiday.
학생이 쓴 원문
My best memory of the holiday was going to the movies with my friends on Christmas. And I ate malatang with my friends. I went to karaoke with my friends. I bought a snack at the convenience store.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
My best memory of the holiday was going to the movies with my friends on Christmas.
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And I ate malatang with my friends.
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I went to karaoke with my friends.
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I bought a snack at the convenience store.
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