Talk about your best memory from a holiday.

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>>> TEACHER EUNICE

It\'s been about 10 years since my wife and I went on a trip to Boracay island.

>>> It\'s been about 10 years since my wife and I went on a trip to Boracay Island.

We didn\'t get married, we were dating when we were in Boracay. 

>>> We didn\'t get married yet, we were dating when we were in Boracay. 
It was not allowed for my wife to go abroad or stay a night with her boy friend before marriage.

>>> It was not allowed for my wife to go abroad or stay a night with her boyfriend before marriage.

My wife lied to my wife\'s mother that she was planning to work for 3 days continuously in order to go abroad with me.

>>> My wife lied to my mother-in-law that she was planning to work for 3 days continuously just to go abroad with me.
Finally, we could get the plane and went to the Boracay resort.

>>> Finally, we could get the plane and went to the Boracay resort.
I can\'t forget the views in the island.

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There is nothing to say, it was incredible, fantastic and exciting.

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Every places we visited was beautiful and all activities were fun.

>>> Every place we visited was beautiful and all the activities were fun.

People in the island was kind and friendly.

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I remembered that local people would communicate with us without any hazing.

>>> I remembered that local people would communicate with us without any hesitations.
We made a lot of friends during our trip.

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My wife and I missed all the things we did in Boracay and we will visit there again if we have a chance.

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