Talk about your favorite day of the week
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Of course, my favorite day is Friday.
Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week\'s work and look forward to the next two day break.
If next Monday is a substitute holiday like the previous Monday, I am even happier to take a three-day break.
Especially in the spring like these days, I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding or golf during weekend, so on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
On the other hand, although it is good to enjoy outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel depressed when I think about the upcoming Monday.
I work as an advisor now, so I don\'t have that much work, but when I was a director, the workload was so much that I really hated going to work on Mondays. So back then, I was really depressed on [이름]days.
Now I\'m happiest on Fridays and most depressed on [이름]days, but less depressed than [이름]days of the past.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
I guess most people like Fridays.
In my case, I don\'t have a favorite day these days.
_T. SHAY^^
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Of course, my favorite day is Friday.
Thank you for sharing.
I guess most people like Fridays.
In my case, I don\'t have a favorite day these days.
_T. SHAY^^
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Of course, my favorite day is Friday.
>>Correct
OR: Like most people, my favorite day is Friday.
Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week\'s work and look forward to the next two day break.
>>Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week\'s work and look forward to the next two-day break.
OR: Fridays make me happy because it\'s the last day of the working week, and I can look forward to the two-day break.
If next Monday is a substitute holiday like the previous Monday, I am even happier to take a three-day break.
>>Correct
OR: In cases where the holiday or substitute holiday falls on a Monday, I am even happier to have a long weekend.
Especially in the spring like these days, I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding or golf during weekend, so on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
>>I especially like spring because I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding a bike or playing golf during the weekend. So on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
On the other hand, although it is good to enjoy outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel depressed when I think about the upcoming Monday.
>>Correct
OR: On the other hand, although I can enjoy the outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel sad thinking about Monday which is just around the corner.
I work as an advisor now, so I don\'t have that much work, but when I was a director, the workload was so much that I really hated going to work on Mondays.
>>Correct
OR: These days, I am working as an advisor, and I am not that busy. However, back when I was a director, the I worked a lot that I really hated to work on Mondays.
So back then, I was really depressed on [이름]days.
>>Correct
OR: Like most people, my favorite day is Friday.
Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week\'s work and look forward to the next two day break.
>>Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week\'s work and look forward to the next two-day break.
OR: Fridays make me happy because it\'s the last day of the working week, and I can look forward to the two-day break.
If next Monday is a substitute holiday like the previous Monday, I am even happier to take a three-day break.
>>Correct
OR: In cases where the holiday or substitute holiday falls on a Monday, I am even happier to have a long weekend.
Especially in the spring like these days, I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding or golf during weekend, so on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
>>I especially like spring because I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding a bike or playing golf during the weekend. So on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
On the other hand, although it is good to enjoy outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel depressed when I think about the upcoming Monday.
>>Correct
OR: On the other hand, although I can enjoy the outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel sad thinking about Monday which is just around the corner.
I work as an advisor now, so I don\'t have that much work, but when I was a director, the workload was so much that I really hated going to work on Mondays.
>>Correct
OR: These days, I am working as an advisor, and I am not that busy. However, back when I was a director, the I worked a lot that I really hated to work on Mondays.
So back then, I was really depressed on [이름]days.
>>Correct
OR: So, back then I usually felt sad on [이름]days.
Now I\'m happiest on Fridays and most depressed on [이름]days, but less depressed than [이름]days of the past.
>>Now I\'m happiest on Fridays and most depressed on [이름]days, but less depressed than the [이름]days in the past.
Now I\'m happiest on Fridays and most depressed on [이름]days, but less depressed than [이름]days of the past.
>>Now I\'m happiest on Fridays and most depressed on [이름]days, but less depressed than the [이름]days in the past.
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