Talk about your lunch in school.
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In Korea, we can eat free lunch in elementary, middle and high school. But to eat dinner in school, we have to pay for that. Taste of food is different by school cause the food director of each school has different taste. When the food director change in a school, the taste and combination of lunch change. My middle school\'s lunch tasted really good when I was 1st grade but after the food director changed it became normal. Many schools have box that we can write down what we(students) want to tell to food director like which kind of food we like.
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
I have seen a lot of videos about school lunches in Korea, there is even one documentary that says Korea has the best lunch in the world. That would be great if it\'s true if it applies to all schools nationwide.
Have a great afternoon!
T. Aki~
In Korea, we can eat free lunch in elementary, middle, and high school.
>>> CORRECT!
But to eat dinner in school, we have to pay for that.
>>> CORRECT!
Taste of food is different by school cause the food director of each school has different taste.
>>> The taste of food is different by school cause the food director of each school has different tastes.
When the food director change in a school, the taste and combination of lunch change.
>>> When the food director changes in a school, the taste and combination of lunch change.
My middle school\'s lunch tasted really good when I was 1st grade but after the food director changed it became normal.
>>> My middle school\'s lunch tasted good when I was in 1st grade but after the food director changed it became normal.
Many schools have box that we can write down what we(students) want to tell to food director like which kind of food we like
>> Many schools have boxes where we can write down what we(students) want to tell to food director like which kind of food we like
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