Talk about your memorable school trip.

Hello Rachel!

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Here are my corrections for you:

When I was 16 years old, the school trip was the worst I experience. 

>> When I was 16 years old, the school trip was the worst I experienced. 

The school trip\'s place was science museum. (other school next to ours went to an amusement park) And all of activity was boring. 

>> The school trip was to a science museum, and all the activities were boring. 

They even brought our phones until the last day we stayed. (the other school didn\'t do that)

>> They even kept our phones until the end of the day.