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And I would like to talking about yesterday what to do. As you know yesterday was Saterday. Actually I had blind date but it was canceled. So I make a mind to go to have eyebrow tattoo with my friend. I don't have much eyebrow and my eyebrow is not pretty. It is important to make a beauty. The eyebrow tattoo was so painful!!!!!!! (Huc!!!) But we had to endure a pain for the beauty. It is so difficult to become beautiful woman. We went to watch movie to Lotte department store after eyebrow tattoo The movie name was "The bad guy of the second floor". It was comic movie of Korea.And It was very funny!!!!! And we came back home 11:00PM after we had a good time. Let's move next composition~~~~

My dear Bella, thank you again for this composition. Wow, you had a blind date?But why was it cancelled..tsk..tsk... Im really sorry to hear that.. Anyway, talking about being beautiful, its very important for us to focus too on our appearance, but always keep in mind that beauty is not just seen outside but likewise inside, and you have both of it! You are reaally good in writing my dear, but you also have to look after your punctuation marks and some verbs on your sentences. Keep up the god work! T.Cam Talk Talk >>Correct And I would like to talking about yesterday what to do. >>And I would like to talk about what I did yesterday.As you know yesterday was Saterday. >>As you know, yesterday was Saturday.Actually I had blind date but it was canceled. >>Actually, I was supposed to go to a blind date but it was cancelled.So I make a mind to go to have eyebrow tattoo with my friend. >>So, I made my mind and got an eyebrow tattoo with my friend.I don't have much eyebrow and my eyebrow is not pretty. >>I don’t have much hair on my eyebrow and my eyebrow is not pretty.It is important to make a beauty. >>It is important to be beautiful.The eyebrow tattoo was so painful!!!!!!! (Huc!!!) >>correctBut we had to endure a pain for the beauty. >>correctIt is so difficult to become beautiful woman. >>It is so difficult to become a beautiful woman.We went to watch movie to Lotte department store after eyebrow tattoo. >>We went to watch a movie at the Lotte department store after getting the eyebrow tattoo.The movie name was "The bad guy of the second floor". >>The movie title was “The bad guy of the second floor”.It was comic movie of Korea.And It was very funny!!!!! >>It was a comedy movie and it was very funny.And we came back home 11:00PM after we had a good time. >>We went home at 11:00 PM and we had a good time. Let's move next composition~~~~ >>Let's move to the next composition.