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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name]! It's a beautiful day!
It is nice talking to you everyday.
Acually I've been pretty busy lately
So I can't ask freely some composition and I write noticeboard all at once.
I'm sorry about that.
But I have enough time to ask you for the moment.
Unfortunately, We are so busy during closing tax.
So we can't do freely anything from the end of the month to the beginning of the month.
Anyway My dear Camille~
Thanks for your help and You are a great help to me
Have a nice day and see you later.
Bye Bye
Best Regards!
Sincerely yours,
Bella
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Bella,
You are such a very nice and sweet lady,I really like the way you are..;)
Like the usual cases, your writing skill is very good. No further correction was noted.
Just continue what youre doing and I know you will be much better in no time. I do believe that you can do that..
Talk to you later my dear..
T.Cam
Dear [Name]. [Name]>> Correct (just put comma)Hello! It's a beautiful day!>>CorrectIt is nice talking to you everyday.>>CorrectAcually I've been pretty busy lately >>Correct (just check the spelling od Actually)So I can't ask freely some composition and I write noticeboard all at once.>> So I can't freely write some composition and post it on the notice board.I'm sorry about that.>>Correct (No problem)But I have enough time to ask you for the moment.>>CorrectUnfortunately, We are so busy during closing tax.>>Unfortunately, we are so busy during the closing tax.So we can't do freely anything from the end of the month to the beginning of the month.>>So, we can't do anything freely from the end until the beginning of the month.Anyway, My dear Camille~>>CorrectThanks for your help and you are a great help to me >> Correct (just remember to use correct puntuation marks)Have a nice day and see you later.>>CorrectBye Bye>>CorrectBest Regards!>>CorrectSincerely yours, >>CorrectBella
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