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And I would like to talking about today. I have time to slet whole day. I'm very tired. I worked from Monday to Friday for a 10 hours for closing tax. Oh~ my dear Camille~ I would like to have some icecream suddenly !!! I like Almond Bong Bong of Baskin Robbins I imagined that I have Almond Bong Bong of Baskin Robbins My work place is no McDonalds, no Dunkin Donuts and no Baskin Robbins. There are too many plant only. And we can't have delivery service Pizza too. Because my work place is too far to have delivery service. It's a terrible to me. Anyway my dear Camille~ Time to go to sleep. Have a nice evening and see you next Monday~~~~~ ByeBye!! Best regards!!!! Bella (wow!! 3B!!! )

Hello my dear Bella! Oh, talking about ice cream, I suddenly craved for ice cream right after Ive read your composition.. I also love eating ice cream most specially, pistachio flavored ice cream...hmmmm..yummy... Anyway... What a wonderful composition.  You were able to express the things you have done this day. In some sentences you just have to be careful on the tenses that you use. Have a good day! Take care T.Cam Talk Talk Talk >>Correct And I would like to talking about today. >>I would like to talk about today.I have time to slet whole day. >>I have time to sleep the whole day.I'm very tired. >>CorrectI worked from Monday to Friday for a 10 hours for closing tax. >>I worked 10 hours from Monday to Friday for closing tax.Oh~ my dear Camille~ >>Oh my dear Camille!I would like to have some icecream suddenly !!! >>I suddenly would like to have some ice cream.I like Almond Bong Bong of Baskin Robbins >>I like an Almond Bong Bong from Baskin Robbins,I imagined that I have Almond Bong Bong of Baskin Robbins >>I am imagining that I have an Almond Bong Bong from Baskin Robbins.My work place is no McDonalds, no Dunkin Donuts and no Baskin Robbins. >>My work place is no McDonalds, Dunkin Donuts or Bsakin Robbins.There are too many plant only. >>There are only a lot of plants.And we can't have delivery service Pizza too. >>We can have pizza delivery service too.Because my work place is too far to have delivery service. >>CorrectIt's a terrible to me. >>It is terriible for me.Anyway my dear Camille~ >>Anyway my dear Camille,Time to go to sleep. >>CorrectHave a nice evening and see you next Monday~~~~~>>Have a nice evening and see you next Monday.ByeBye!! >>Correct >>Good bye!Best regards!!!! >>correctBella (wow!! 3B!!! )  >> correct >> Bella