Talking about learn English
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ashley^^
Where are you now? Did you already have your dinner?
I hope you did no eat instant food again today^^.
Thanks for conveying your thoughts about this topic.
I partly agree with your statements. I was able to see how good
you are at expressing your own ideas.
However, your grammar composition today was a little bit confusing.
I can see that we still need to work on with your grammar skill.
I know that you are having a hard with in studying English.
Don\'t be dismayed about that. Cheer up^^ I can see much potential
in you so that is not impossible to happen.
Keep on believing^^
I will see you in class later..
Teacher Liza
I think it is very important for children to learn English in early age.
>> I think it is very important for children to learn English at an early age.
The reason why, I was experienced to my childhood.
>> The reason is that I have experience this during my childhood,
I was learn language to Korea in my childhood to quickly better than the other people.
>> During my childhood, I can learn language in Korean quickly better than other people.
My brain was sponge in childhood.
>> My brain is like a sponge when I was a child.
I was accepting everything to learn language.
>> I was absorbing everything that I learning about a language.
Important thing to when was learn language is accept everything without prejudice.
>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: What is important thing is that we learn a language by accepting it everything without any prejudice.
After all when we are adult we aren\'t accept to few thing.
>> After all when we become adults we are not that receptive to things.
Because we have to prejudice.
>> Because we became prejudice.
I am studing slowly to learn English more than my childhood.
>> I am learning English slowly more than my childhood.
>> OR: I learn English slowly more than my childhood.
Thank you teacher Liza !
>>Correct^^
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