Talking about learn English

2014-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

I think it is very important for children to learn English in early age. The reason why, I was experienced to my childhood. I was learn language to Korea in my childhood to quickly better than the other people. My brain was sponge in childhood. I was accepting everything to learn language. Important thing to when was learn language is accept everything without prejudice. After all when we are adult we aren't accept to few thing. Because we have to prejudice. I am studing slowly to learn English more than my childhood. Thank you teacher Liza !

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ashley^^


Where are you now? Did you already have your dinner?

I hope you did no eat instant food again today^^.

Thanks for conveying your thoughts about this topic.

I partly  agree with your statements. I was able to see how good

you are at expressing your own ideas.

However, your grammar composition today was a little bit confusing.

I can see that we still need to work on with your grammar skill.

I know that you are having a hard with in studying English.

Don\'t be dismayed about that. Cheer up^^ I can see much potential

in you so that is not impossible to happen.

Keep on believing^^

I will see you in class later..


Teacher Liza


I think it is very important for children to learn English in early age.

>> I think it is very important for children to learn English at an early age.

The reason why, I was experienced to my childhood.

>> The reason is that I have experience this during my childhood,
 I was learn language to Korea in my childhood to quickly better than the other people.

>>  During my childhood, I can learn language in Korean quickly better than other people.

My brain was sponge in childhood.

>> My brain is like a sponge when I was a child.
I was accepting everything to learn language.

>> I was absorbing everything that I learning about a language.
 Important thing to when was learn language is accept everything without prejudice.

>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: What is important thing is that we learn a language by accepting it everything without any prejudice.

After all when we are adult we aren\'t accept to few thing.

>> After all when we become adults we are not that receptive to things.

Because we have to prejudice.

>> Because we became prejudice.
I am studing slowly to learn English more than my childhood.
>> I am learning English slowly more than my childhood.

>> OR: I learn English slowly more than my childhood.
 Thank you teacher Liza !

>>Correct^^

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