Talking about the teenager
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강사 첨삭
Hello Ashley^^
I guess you are not that busy today because you were able to
do this homework. I agree with you in this composition.
It is really a truth that having a proper education can change a person and can
change the world at the same time.^^
Thanks for your effort and time sending this in.
By the way my dear have time to check my corrections below.
I want you to study the following:
- proper spacing and punctuation marks
- proper capitalization
- choice of words and spellings
Just feel free to ask me if you have questions.
See you in class^^
Teacher Liza
Today is child slavery opposition day.
>> Today is Child Slavery Opposition Day.
I had backing for the Bangladesh child since 2013.
>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: I remember a child from Bangladesh in 2013.
I want to spend to school for the child and i hope she has to drinks some clean water.
>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: I want to give that child a proper education and I hope that she can drink some clean water.
Now, she is student going to school at the slums village.
>> Now, she is a student who is going to school and lives in a slum village.
Also, she drinks a clean water.
>>In addition she can already drink clean water.
But, still now a lot of students are not go to school because of poverty. It is so big problem.
>> But still, there a lot of student are not going to school because if poverty.
They need to learning something at school.
>> They need to learn something from school.
so they must overcome poverty and escape the labor.
>> So they must overcome poverty and escape childhood labor.
Thank you teacher Liza ! Have a nice day.
>> Correct
Ashley
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