Talking my problem to a competely unknown person is somehow awkward.
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Hello!
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
The world is full of unknown people than known people.
>> There are more strangers than acquaintances in the world.
We can live with cheers jeering to unknown people.
>> We sometimes live with jeers from unknown people.
If this is my rudeness, I apologize with this.
>> If you think this is rude, I apologize.
I am just trying to familiar with other people now.
>> I am just trying to become familiar with other people now.
Nowadays the sky is cloudy not sunny so I feel gloomy like the weather.
>> Nowadays, the sky is cloudy not sunny that\'s why I feel as gloomy as the weather.
I hate the rain. I like sunny days. I want to play out to wider world.
>> I hate it when it rains as I like sunny days. I want to play outside and not confined indoors due to the rain.
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