Talking on the phone
학생이 쓴 원문
I talk on the phone with my mom once a week.
Since I live far from my hometown, talking on the phone is the best way to keep in touch.
We usually talk about our daily life.
She gives me a good advice when I am in a trouble.
I also try to make a phone call to my best friend.
It makes me happy and laugh.
We normally talk for over an hour.
We must have many things to talk.
Sometimes I text to him to keep in touch.
강사 첨삭
My dear [이름],
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The way you express your thoughts and opinions is very good! And I commend you for a job well done...
Thumbs up for a good work and I hope you will continue what youre doing...
Talk to you again later my dear...
T.Cam
I talk on the phone with my mom once a week.
>>correctSince I live far from my hometown, talking on the phone is the best way to keep in touch.
>>correctWe usually talk about our daily life.
>>correctShe gives me a good advice when I am in a trouble.
>>She gives me good advice when Im in trouble.I also try to make a phone call to my best friend.
>>correctIt makes me happy and laugh.
>>correctWe normally talk for over an hour.
>>correctWe must have many things to talk.
>>We must have many things to talk about.Sometimes I text to him to keep in touch.
>>Sometimes I text him to keep in touch.
>>Sometimes, I send him message to keep in touch.
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