Talking on the phone

2010-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I talk on the phone with my mom once a week. Since I live far from my hometown, talking on the phone is the best way to keep in touch. We usually talk about our daily life. She gives me a good advice when I am in a trouble. I also try to make a phone call to my best friend. It makes me happy and laugh. We normally talk for over an hour. We must have many things to talk. Sometimes I text to him to keep in touch.

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My dear [이름], Like the usual compositions you sent me, everything is very impressive... The way you express your thoughts and opinions is very good! And I commend you for a job well done... Thumbs up for a good work and I hope you will continue what youre doing... Talk to you again later my dear... T.Cam   I talk on the phone with my mom once a week. >>correctSince I live far from my hometown, talking on the phone is the best way to keep in touch. >>correctWe usually talk about our daily life. >>correctShe gives me a good advice when I am in a trouble. >>She gives me good advice when Im in trouble.I also try to make a phone call to my best friend. >>correctIt makes me happy and laugh. >>correctWe normally talk for over an hour. >>correctWe must have many things to talk. >>We must have many things to talk about.Sometimes I text to him to keep in touch. >>Sometimes I text him to keep in touch. >>Sometimes, I send him message to keep in touch.    

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