Task 1 .1
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]
I live at 80 Rockford street in Toronto, Ontario. My house is located across the street from the construction site at 88 Rockford street which your company has lead.
I’m writing to complain about the noise from construction site. The construction workers has worked everyday from 6 a.m to 10 p.m since last month. The problem is that the workers yell each other frequently and use the equipment which makes very loud noise.
This has impacted on my life so much. First of all, the noise has disturbed my sleep every night. Not having a good sleep at night has given me a lot of fatigue during the day. In addition, The noise has made me not to be able to focus on my workload.
I would like to ask you to conduct the workers to only work from specific hours such as 9 a.m to 5 p.m. This would be still not perfect solution for me as a person working at home nearby your construction site, but it could less affect on my works and other neighbors would feel happier if you adopt my s
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