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학생이 쓴 원문
There are many tourist attractions in the world.
So I have many places that I want to visit.
The first place that I want to visit is N Seoul Tower.
Here is one of Korea\'s famous tourist attractions but I have not been there before so N Seoul Tower is the first place that I want to visit.
The second one is Statue of Liberty.
This is one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world.
The statue represents New York so many visitors visit here and I want to see the statue for real.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I also want to see the Statue of Liberty and the rest of New York City. So I hope to see you there!
But first, see you tonight in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
So I have many places that I want to visit.
>> Correct!
The first place that I want to visit is N Seoul Tower.
>> The first place that I want to visit is the N Seoul Tower.
Here is one of Korea\'s famous tourist attractions but I have not been there before so N Seoul Tower is the first place that I want to visit.
>> This is one of Korea\'s famous tourist attractions but I have not been there before so N Seoul Tower is the first place that I want to visit.
The second one is Statue of Liberty.
>> The second one is the Statue of Liberty.
This is one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world.
>> Correct!
The statue represents New York so many visitors visit here and I want to see the statue for real.
>> The statue represents New York so many visitors visit there and I want to see the statue for real.
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