Task
학생이 쓴 원문
If I will be an actor, I have to travel to many countries and I will miss many celebrations.
But I think I can\'t handle these things because this is my job and is that I wish.
So I think I\'m ready for this and when the time comes, I\'ll enjoy the time and I\'ll have to do better for my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
When you will have to travel because of your work, the solution by then is to bring them along with you. It can be risky but it can still be fun.
See you in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
But I think I can\'t handle these things because this is my job and is that I wish.
>> But I think I can handle these things because this is my job and it\'s what I wish.
So I think I\'m ready for this and when the time comes, I\'ll enjoy the time and I\'ll have to do better for my family.
>> Correct!
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