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There are many ways to level up my acting.
But everyone knows how we can level up our acting.
The way is practice. If I want to more develop my acting than others, I have to do more practice than others.
And I think there is another way to develop acting and this way locates me a higher level than others.
The way is a strategy. The methodical strategy increases my acting level higher and faster.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are absolutely right about all of these things you\'re said, I couldn\'t agree more.
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>>Correct!
But everyone knows how we can level up our acting.
>> Correct!
The way is practice. If I want to more develop my acting than others, I have to do more practice than others.
>>The way is practice. If I want to develop more my acting than others, I have to do more practice than others.
And I think there is another way to develop acting and this way locates me a higher level than others.
>>And I think there is another way to develop acting and this way it places me a higher level than others.
The way is a strategy. The methodical strategy increases my acting level higher and faster.
>> Correct!
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