Task
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I have three appointments today and among them, the most important appointment is an acting class.
Because the acting class is related to my dream and future.
Another reason why the acting class is the most important is the acting class has the highest price among my appointment so I can\'t be absent the class.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
I never thought that acting class could be very expensive. Anyway, every time you attend your class, you are always one step closer to your dreams.
Do great with it. See you later!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Because the acting class is related to my dream and future.
>> This acting class is related to my dream and future.
Another reason why the acting class is the most important is the acting class has the highest price among my appointment so I can\'t be absent the class.
>> Another reason why the acting class is the most important is it has the highest price among all my appointments so I can\'t be absent during the class.
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