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I think they have differences.
Truth\'s hurt makes me feel worse and sometimes the hurt can make me shocked but usually, it isn\'t longer than lie\'s hurt.
When the lie is discovered, the hurt makes a person more painful and makes feeling betrayed.
This hurts is longer than the first one and it makes trauma.
It means lie\'s hurt destroys the one more than truth\'s hurt.
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Hi!
Thanks for sending this even if it\'s a minute before class time.
The rule here is never tell a lie and you won\'t be lied on.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Truth\'s hurt makes me feel worse and sometimes the hurt can make me shocked but usually, it isn\'t longer than lie\'s hurt.
>> The truth hurts and makes me feel worse and sometimes the hurt can make me shocked but usually, it isn\'t longer than a lie\'s hurt.
When the lie is discovered, the hurt makes a person more painful and makes feeling betrayed.
>> When the lie is discovered, the pain makes a person more hurt and makes the feeling betrayed.
This hurts is longer than the first one and it makes trauma.
>> This pain is longer than the first one and creates trauma.
It means lie\'s hurt destroys the one more than truth\'s hurt.
>> It means a lie\'s pain destroys someone more than the truth.
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